For the "Hobo's Journey" game, I would make the name less offense to homeless people such as "How a homeless person lives and how to prevent and help people with this issue" but in a shorter name. I would include ways on how you can help people such as "give children in poverty toys" or "sacrifice your time to serve food for homeless people." Also, the game is based on what you know already and doesn't provide ways on how to help people. This game is also not that useful because it is a quiz game.
For "Larry", I believe it should include a reason why you must avoid these things because then it would tell you that you should prevent them by doing certain things that cause this. Also it should either include the movement part as the intro and then the find food part, you should be told if the item you part pick up is edible food. Finally, I found that, although it was not a quiz, I learned almost nothing from it, so the maker of the game should improve the educational value of the game.
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